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j'ai mal a la tête!!!!

Charcoal Rose
Stem I
Time dwindles as the petals fall from a rose of timeless sleep.
How long has it been since the sun has shone upon her weary limbs of light.
Forever the hour is dim and time is ticking to and fro in handless tocks
As from red to rust and wrinkled wear makes the charcoal stained tear drops
just as fair as her thorn less stem is bare.
But nothing so left on seconds spins the dials faster than slow and slower than fast;
For its all a creeping instant when seconds count the hours and moments count the lessons of the past.
Stem II
Nay does death bloom or life bud, cause in all her time the rose is never dead.
Lest the showers stop and minutes bear down to the last hour,
or when lustful hands deplume our fairest of reds.
She ages and withers, and withers and ages till the soil leaves the ground and leaves the rose only to lather in the cleansings of the sun.
Who glares down and burns bright her dulcet prayers
as they blacken and venture straight into the blight charcoal made ashes.

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:iconglitterplague:
this is beautiful, especially the wordage. You do write so beautifully!

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:: Oh God he sucked me dry. Just bones and birdsongs, ashes and dust ::
:icontrevor-brown:
:O_O: !! It is me ! Wow ! well done !

:heart: :kiss: Thank you !!

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-waiting For Godot-
:iconjamie42:
This is beautiful. :kiss:

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"Take seriously what others make fun of, and vice-versa." -Anton LaVey
:iconpaiute:
beautiful? ..."truthful words are not beautiful, beautiful words are not truthful..." but beauty is true and i try to capture beatiful words

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Hey, look at this>
The bad guy says " how come i cant ever get any good help"
Bam Sticky again!
:iconpaiute:
yes, i thought that picture had a lot of potential and i tried made it kinetic.
does it look ok?

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Hey, look at this>
The bad guy says " how come i cant ever get any good help"
Bam Sticky again!
:iconpaiute:
beauty is as beauty does, and beauty does beautifully well

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Hey, look at this>
The bad guy says " how come i cant ever get any good help"
Bam Sticky again!

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